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welcome to my blog .For writing  we had to do a claim this is my claim.

                                         

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I know that your muscles move your bones.I have told you this fact because I think that your muscular system is the most important system in your body.

As you might tall I am doing the muscular system in my grope we had to say why it is the best system.I think min is the best one in my grope but it is probably not.

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How maui slowed the sun

W.A.L.T visualise to help me keep track and retell what I have read.

hi every one we have been I read myth and legend my legend was how Maui slowed the sun.

Maui had hear his brothers talking about there was not a enough sunlight so Maui try to catch the sun . I drew a picture of there is not enough sunlight in the very corner.At the corner on the side there is the fish that you're so lonely because they don't get quite because the sunlight from Maui brother to catch the fish. then in the top corner there is the brothers siting by Maui duding about that there was not enough sunlight from the fish.

My body system

W.A.L.T explain what different body systems are and how they work.

The name's of the systems that we were doing was muscular systems,digestive systems,nervous systems,respiratory systems.We did the google drawing because it is important to now about it .

The digestive system job is to break down the food we eat into smaller units called nutrients.

The nervous system job is to tell you if it is hot or cold.

The respiratory system job is to is  series of organs responsible for taking in oxygen and expelling carbon dioxide.

The muscular system job is to help your bones stay together.

Thank you for looking at my blog post but if you what to now more about the body just ask me a question and I will reply.