W.A.L.T: read information and then re-write the important parts in our own words
To day we have been writing about Armistice day.
To day we have been lining about armistice with my reding
This is the paragraph I read about Armistice day.
"At 11am on 11 November this year, Aotearoa New Zealand marked the centenary of the armistice that ended the First World War in 1918. On that day 100 years ago, after four years of brutal conflict, war finally gave way to peace." - From https://ww100.govt.nz/armistice
This is how i re-wote the paragraph in my own words .
November the 11 the first world war ended in 1918 at 11am 4 years of fighting then there was peace .From then and now it was 100 years ago.
Hello Ebony. What an interesting topic to write about. I like how you showed us how it was written and then how you told us in your own words about the war. What a scary thing for people to go through. I wouldn't like to go to war. How do you think people felt after the war ended? I look forward to your reply
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