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Wednesday, 6 May 2020

what i have been doing

 I have not been doing very much in quarantine but the main thing that I have been doing is watching movies which I have watched a lot of the shows as well my favourite show that I have watched is stranger things my favourite movie that I have watched is Cloud 9. Cloud 9 is about 1 team called the Swifts and a girl called Kayla Morgan and her boyfriend Nick which both were on the swift team . there old team mate got a punctured lung and a whole bunch of broken bones trying to do the cloud 9 which will started to walk dogs after that accident and Kayla convince them to start snowboarding again .nicks dad didn't like Kayla so nicks Dad told nick to make Kayla break something to kick her off the team she got kicked off the swift team and made her own team and she got the perfect score doing the cloud 9 which is three flips in the air in a row .Kayla also snowboarder down the biggest Mountain were she live's   she also stopped halfway and the ice broke and all of it was tumbling down behind her and eventually it caught up and she was buried under the snow which you can't breathe under and will saved her life.
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  1. Mr Terry Mitchell6 May 2020 at 20:41

    Hi Skye
    First of all, welcome back to school work, even though this is the middle of week 4 of the term.
    You have done a lot of writing here which is really great. I now need you to proofread it for punctuation. There are hardly any commas, full stops or capital letters, which made it a bit hard to understand what you were saying. I want you to read it out loud and see where you want to stop and take a breath - that's probably where there need to be a comma or a full stop. If I was reading this out loud I would have passed out from lack of oxygen before I got to the end of the first sentence.
    I look forward to seeing your work from the Reading, Writing and Maths Hurumanu work that was set at the beginning of last week.
    - Mr Mitchell

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