Write the Essay Sentence

- Write the Essay Sentence

 The 'W' Sentence - makes the sentence sound thoughtful & knowledgeable

Remember the rule: not every 'W' word works as a sentence starter.

Remember to put the comma in when the parts affected by your 'W' word are finished

Examples - Who, When, While, Whereas, Where, What, Whilst. With 

Whilst the class was eating, I read my book. Where you like chocolate, others prefer candy.

Must Do     Should Do     Can Do

2 - 3                4 -6              10+ 

When you leave my home closes the door

While you do my home work you are going get me a B or B+

Who do you think you are, a sock on your hand 

While Toni was working, i was complaining 

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The Adverb Sentence:

Start the sentence with an adverb, it adds interest or intrigue. 
Remember the rule, when you start the sentence with an adverb, place a comma after the adverb then write the rest of the story. 

Some Adverbs you can use- Surprisingly, Simply, Excitedly, Concerningly, Confusingly, Remarkably, Significantly, Often, Firstly, Similarly. 

Examples:

Excitedly, Allen ran towards the canteen. 

Firstly, the class assembled in two lines by the door. 

Independent Task: Create your own examples.
Must Do 2-3       Should Do 5-6       Can Do 10 

Suddenly, Toni did the work that she was given in class

Thankfully, the end of school is at 3 pm

Shockingly, school has not been that boring

Luckily, I have my friends at school

Quickly, the class ran out of the gate out of school

Skillfully, I punched my old friend

The Preposition Sentence:

Try starting the sentence with a preposition, a word that gives movement or position. . 

Remember the rule, when you start the sentence with an preposition, you need to put a comma where the movement or position ends. 

Some Prepositions you can use- In, Against, Before, Between, Over, Behind, Within, Under, Below, At, For, Throughout, Near, About

Examples:

In 2013, Hornby High School introduced year 7 and 8 students. 

Behind the bookcase, a hidden door revealed a secret room. 

Independent Task: Create your own examples.

Must Do 2-3       Should Do 5-6       Can Do 10 

At school within school hours, i tried not to fall asleep.

Before school, I ran away.

15 min in to school, i left school and went for a run

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Speech about Kate Shepphard

                                        Kate Sheppard

Hello my name is Ebony and this is my informational speech about Kate Sheppard. Kate Sheppard is famous for being a leader for all women. The first time that try to make a difference in women's rights she did not succeed but she did it again and she traveled around the world to get people to stand by and when she got in her 40s she succeeded in get in woman to vote .If it wasn't for her, women nowadays probably would not be able to vote. Kate did a lot of things in her lifetime not only to make women able to vote but she all so traveled the country, writing to newspapers, holding public meetings and lobbying members of Parliament.  I picked Kate Sheppard because of all of her great work with women's rights. In 2015 there was a punk-rock musical called That bloody women made about Kate Sheppard life journey. Thank you for listening to my speech.

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Samoan Language Week

Hello my name is Ebony, Welcome to my blog this week is Samoan Language Week so we had to do a task at it and i picked to learn about Samoan phrases this is some of the ones that i learn today i hope you learn something new from my blog post. 

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