Humanities essay planning

 Text - Abomination

Author - Robert Swindell

Breach of HR Article interact:

• Breach means to not have followed it, or have broken it.

Article 1 : All human beings are born free and equal in dignity + rights. They are endowed with reason and conscience and should act towards one another in a spirit of brotherhood.

- You cannot be born into slavery, and no one is born differently. Everyone's the same. You have access to basic human rights, water, food, shelter.

• Martha, born into a religious cult, has basic human rights but no personal freedom. Martha is treated like a slave by her parents.

• Abomination/Jim, born and kept in a cage not allowed outside, has basic human rights, lost rights to education, love, freedom, socialisation, clothing.

Why the author did this to Jim: Good storytelling, builds suspense & tension, feels sorry for Jim, angry at parents, shows relative influence of bullying.

Quotes:

• No friends because I’m righteous - I know I seem weird to them but it's not me, inside I'm just like them Pg.18

• Not allowed radio - The righteous believe the Devil reaches young people through pop music. Pg.11

• Kid in the basement - Abomination? It's a boy Scott a little boy. He lives in the cellar in a cage Pg.143

• Mother says they're raised in the dark like heathens.

• Jim doesn't see his mum - And she lets her kid live in a cage?...she doesn't know. Pg.146

Main story idea: Makes us feel sympathy, depressed, sympathy for Martha. We forgive Martha for keeping the secret about Jim because she is suffering.

Martha went to live with her sister, she got new clothes, not treated like a slave.

Abomination, reunited with his mum, gets clothes, proper shelter, basic human rights. Trauma - not gonna have a normal life.

lawyer Paragraph: How technology has changed the way we live

How technology has changed the way we live 

This it my topic because this has changed the way we live.

It matters because in the 1900s we did not have all the

technology that we have at the moment and it is a good thing and a bad thing.

This is because it is making kids not go outside as much as their parents would like you too.

This matters because people are too into what they are doing on their phones

that they are walking in the middle of the road and ending up in hospital.

It also doesn't help kids young eyes look at a bright phone all day. 

I know this is true because one of my friends had this happen to them because they were not paying attention to what they were doing. More than 38,000 people die per year just because of them not looking at what they are doing. People also tend to blink less when using digital devices, which contributes to dry eye and eye strain.

Independent Task #1 (Slide 8)

                                                          Independent Task

I did this but I made it in a book but I don't know were it is but you can try this if you would like.

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Questions? For you

 

• What are the traditional roles of men, women and children that are shown in this community?

• At what age are members of Gloriavale expected to begin work?

• What role does Religion play in the lives of Gloriavale members

• Do you think the people living in Gloriavale are happy? Why or why not

• Do you think the people in Gloriavale experience Human Rights? 

• Would you be happy to live in a community like Gloriavale. Why or why not?

 5 minute task.

Something that is controlled by power. Gives you the ability to access the internet, and wifi. Is a piece of machinery something that can be hand-powered. A piece of equipment developed from the application of scientific knowledge to the practical aims of human life.

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The things i did in the holidays

                                          My Holidays

In the holidays I had my birthday, for my birthday I got a lot of messages from all of my friends and that really helped my mental wellbeing because I was at my house for two weeks with only my dad. That is why it was nice to talk to someone that was not him. I am very grateful for everything he did for me but I needed time to myself but I had my friends so I was fine. So I went out with my friends for my birthday. We went to the mall and just walked around. I recommend spending time with your friends because you don't even need to buy things with your friend to have fun and  it will help you with your mental wellbeing.

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Art

 Hey there this is Ebony, this term i have been doing art and we could do it about different thing so i did 2 about Haute Couture and one about this Pandemic. This is what we have been doing for the last 10 weeks

This is 3 of the art work i have been doing two of them are about Haute Couture they are very different but look really good.Then i have one about the Pandemic i made it look like the man is falling because of the Pandemic and the lady is they with the shot for it. 

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